This story is so good! It leaves the player wanting to know where Charlie is, what the player did to him, and whose birthday is it? This game is super engaging and interesting, and I love the way the characters are introduced. The blur text effect is super cool as well as the way the passages change once you've interacted with them. There are some grammar and spelling mistakes in the passages but you can still understand what is being presented to you. Love the "knocking" text changing colors and shaking.