The story is well organized and simple! I like the work of detail you did on the title art. I also like that every choices you make changes the background color. This would be useful if you need to know where to go to Kansas city. The problem with me is that I am very bad directions and knowing where to go. When I keep clicking on the train station I sometimes couldn't tell if I'm lost or not. Maybe you can added like an choice that would help for the player to make sure that your going to the right way. Like for example, talking to someone or a destination on where you are in the map. Overall this is well made!