My god! I loved it! Great story, I really liked to follow it. I was a really mega plus that I could play it on my Android device browser! To me was a really important mechanic that I could skip the story once I've read it once. And the umbrella mini game I also liked it. It was hard enough to be fun. The last one, when you try to kill her, could be more random. I found it easier than the first two ones.
I reaaaaally really liked the art. Loved it. And the music! It was dynamic.
Congrats, man!