A very interesting idea, and a lot of progress within the small timeframe we were allowed. You have a good voice for narration, and I think you would do well with a YouTube channel dedicated to similar themes. The editing and layout of the map was pretty good. In the next competition I bet you could produce a very polished game if you focused on one section of this story. There is a lot of ambition behind this, but 2 weeks is such a short time for anyone to work. I think there were some spots it would have been nice to fit in a fight scene, even if everyone lives and the story doesn't really change, a little action can shake up the pace. Bringing an educational aspect to the game was very creative and something I really enjoyed. Keep up the awesome work!