Good job completing the jam!
Some things to consider:
- Love the narrative and the worldbuilding you've created here! Your dialogue blurbs, art, and sound all work together really well to tell a story.
- The biggest issue I think you have here is finding the perfect balance between difficulty and player satisfaction. I can foresee a lot of players becoming very frustrated by not being able to find the path, which is partly on the player, but as a game designer it is always something you have to think about. Look into how you could provide tips or assistance to players without ruining the aesthetic and narrative of the game. I can think of a few ways, but I from what you guys have created here, I have no doubt that you can too!
- There are a few minor grammar/punctuation mistakes in your dialogue blurbs. Nothing too big, but a short editing session never hurt anyone!
- Think about ways you can add variety to your levels that doesn't solely focus on level design. I saw in one of the comments that you thought about adding someone chasing you. This could definitely be an interesting mechanic, but make sure you're thinking about how such mechanics will impact gameplay.
Overall, your gameplay was well executed and your narrative was entertaining!
Good work team! I would definitely be interested to see how you progress with this game.