I share the game with libre licenses because I don't like privatizing my content
1. If it is a demo and as I mentioned, one day it will go to Steam
2. The narrative can be improved, of course, your comments help
3. I'm glad you like my art style, I didn't make the backgrounds by the way
4. I didn't know that "Complete Achromatopsia" existed, this is the first time I've heard of it.
Your interpretation is good and it is one of the things I want to give with the novel, I cannot reveal what happens to the protagonist because I would be revealing to you what the whole game is about.
Thank you very much for your comment