Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles
Jobs
Tags
(+1)

wow thank you so much for streaming my game!! didn't expect in a million years a video of a thing i made would be on the internet :>

i'm glad you found the story interesting! tbh it's the part of the game i found most fun in developing, trying to come up with a twisted version of a christmas miracle and the story behind someone wishing for something going horribly wrong. the narrative came first in my eyes and i'm happy to hear you liked it!

with that said, sorry to hear you thought the game was boring. i do kinda feel i went overboard with the dialogue and the ending, maybe a part of me wanted to make the game longer so it wouldn't last 20 minutes. but yeah i'll try to tone the length of certain aspects down for my next projects so they're not as slow to get through. also ngl, i really like writing lots of dialogue and making long moody scenes lmao, but i'll still keep in mind your criticism.

finally, i know i should feel bad, but the bathtub drawing was friggin hilarious XD.

thank you for trying the game and for your feedback!

(+1)

It's not a problem! I am awfully blunt with my criticisms in games but don't feel bad! It's something that is pretty much subjective. Others might see it differently. Though yeah, I think if you want to make it longer, it has to be reasonable in story wise to justify the slowness! I like slowness if the story is captivating enough and it does not have fillers.

I'm sorry that I made you laugh with that bathtub imagery but I swear I couldn't give up that idea when I thought of it so deeply by logic.

I hope next time your stories would be improving as it goes on! I enjoyed it quite much.

(+1)

don't worry, i'm always open to criticism! and yeah i'll try to keep improving with my following projects :D