I just played through so much, Nik's route is particularly popping off, but I just have a few error corrections (at least what I believe to be errors) if you have any drive to fix them. It's very little.
SPOILERS BTW PEOPLE
- In William's route, talking to Marcy (I don't know which time, probably first) it says "If they can tell the truth, they why can't you?" As opposed to "then why can't you"
- In Nik's route, talking to Mr. Briggs, following all the stuff about "to prosper with a family of five, it is demanded that we slit the throats of 500 others"
it says "Genteely of course" it is probably just gently, but I did just learn about "Genteelly" being a word, that would fit there grammatically, and seem closer than gently.
- In Nik's again, this is a frame issue rather than a text issue, right before they do the naughty in Sam's room, it says, "It's the green bottle" -> "The outside is sticky..." -> "And the inside is stickier."
when it says "The outside is sticky" he grows back clothes and his pp has a bit of an outline showing his fur through his clothes, but definitely not a shape that's supposed to be there
Other than that, please keep going, I'm especially excited for the Murdoch update like really soon. He had some tea for sure, especially with all the Blithe stuff, which then overlapped I think with Nik's, but I don't think we'll ever know. (unless we do)
Thank you.