Digging the tone and atmosphere. You have a beautiful soundscape and backdrops that immediately draw me in and make me want to explore further.
One thing that could take things to the next level would be sound effects for the UI and text elements. It would make the text more engaging, especially in the more action heavy moments like you have with the screenshake and the *spoiler* coming out of the bushes. Another dimension of sound would really bring this thing to life!
Just some very early thoughts I had in my first 20 mins of play-through. Nice work; continuing now