This update has been really good, I like how you rewrote the dialogue with Jeze when he takes you to the kitchen (specifically during the second meeting at Noto’s where you learn about his debt.) Only one issue I noticed; If you decide to take things further with him, he still talks about you cheating on Hazel, and you still get the Game Over afterwards, which causes a bit of disjoint. Outside of that small issue though, this new update’s been amazing! Can’t wait to see what you have in store for the next episode.