This is absolutely brilliant and could've been a masterpiece. Why on earth is it so short? And I wish you would've cut out the irrelevant sub-plot (honestly it didn't work at all and it barely made any sense) and honestly all the separate endings as well. I'd rather have a long linear story to follow this girl in. You could've used almost all those separate endings in one single storyline. Cause honestly this is like the hottest game ever. Please consider making a longer version <3 Well done.