Great start! Interesting world and very cute moments from, apologizing for groping the undead, the tummy rubs and Jayden. Only complaint is during the segg scene Jayden's arm starts spasming during doggy. Also I'd love to have a closeup shot of the climax during the seggs. Only thing I worry about is that there will be too much characters and they all won't have enough spotlight/development. But overall this was great!!! Thank you for this VN!
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Thank you very much and I'll use that suggestion in the future.
I only noticed the hand spasm thing when I was finishing up the renpy side of things and with how much I had pushed my laptop the previous day, I didn't want to risk redoing everything so I just left it as it was. I might fix it in the future but I think I'll be leaving it as is for the foreseeable future.