I haven't gotten to chapter 3 yet but I just finished chapter 2 and IT'S SO GOOD?? Sorry I just had to come here to gush about it because gosh you did wonderful on the writing!
Spoilers (for chapter 2) below
That amusement park really left me feeling emotional. It's so heartwarming and I truly love the friendship between Fay, Hendrix, and Edmund, as their friendship really feels natural. I find myself looking forward to seeing more of them. Most of the otome games I've seen or just in romance stories in general, whenever there's two guys who likes the MC, there's usually this rivalry and tension (which can be done well, but I'm just so tired of that trope LMAO, so this is really refreshing). I'm glad that both Hendrix and Edmund are both friendly towards each other and I love their interaction as well (I sound like a broken record at this point lol)! I also can't decide who's my favorite anymore, they're all just so equally loveable...
Not only the friendship between Hendrix, Fay, and Edmund- I also enjoyed the relationship between Lisa and Fay. I think you're good at writing interactions tbh, because all of them are on point imo! Going through chapter 2 has honestly been a really comfortable and wholesome ride (well, aside from tense and darker scenes...)
And also, the CGs are so beautiful. I've said this once, but I'll say it again, I truly love your art style. It's so pretty, I even had it as my desktop background LMAOO
I'll be back after I finish chapter 3, but please do know that all your hardwork is seriously paying off because this game is a banger so far! Thank you so much for all of your hardwork!!