Just wanted to say, as someone who's learning Spanish and Korean as a native English speaker I can confirm English is an absolute scam. If I had to teach it to someone else I would have no idea how to even begin, since none of the rules make sense to me. In English class I can look at something and be able to tell if the grammar is correct since I read so much, but if I had to explain WHY it's correct or what's wrong with it, I would be totally stumped. So all things considered your English in this game is quite good, considering how confusing it is as a language. Some advice is perhaps type your scripts into a word processing software, set your language to English, and then run the spelling / grammar check software. That tends to catch most mistakes. =)
I love the aesthetic and pixel art / colors used in the game. It's such an empty and somewhat depressing / apocalyptic aesthetic at the beginning, but becomes more bittersweet and less threatening at the end, but still not entirely happy, which I like. I also love the character designs. Also, I LOVE the music. It fit the tone and setting perfectly. I was wondering, did you ever upload it? I'd love to listen to it but can't find it anywhere.