Very moving story, very sad to play. I think it would be interesting to lean into the unfairness a little more; while some areas are briefly dangerous, most of the map still feels relatively chill to roam around in. More stealth sections I think would make sense here.
The references throughout the game to the boat and the ocean as goalposts felt quite foreboding. Knowing the tragic fate of many refugee families who try to flee oppression by boat, I did expect an unhappy ending here.