The gloomy atmosphere and very apathetic mood of the character really comes across in your writing style! You definitely succeeded in portraying what the typical life of this character is like, before I assume it changes forever. The window for play being so small caused some issues in choosing text for me, and there were some grammar and spelling issues that drew me out of the narrative somewhat. They feel like quirks of the character we're playing as, but nothing else in the format seems to aid that. All in all an interesting and emotionally strong experience!