You captured well how mundane this kind of life is. I felt so bad when the one good thing he was looking forwards to the whole week turned out to be really disappointing dessert. I don't actually think you need images for this to work, but the text feels a bit like a draft at this point since there are a lot of spelling mistakes. If this were formatted like a diary or journal entry, that might make more sense because the character could be making mistakes while writing. The dreams added a lot of context and backstory to the character, which was cool.