The theming of the game was a very smart choice to keep the terrifying, mysterious mood! The narrative itself and the descriptors were very gripping, it made me interested in how this game would look in a visual-based format rather than text-based. Some technical issues distracted me somewhat, such as how hovering over the text you want to choose turns it the same color as the background, and how in the penultimate scene you can only continue to the final scene from checking the mattress. Also, just a personal little nitpick but it's always strange to play a choice-based game where you can end the game after just a single choice lol
But none of this is to discount your ability to create an atmosphere! I only experienced a few endings but I want to go back and see more. Wonderful job!