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Neat game, with lots of good ideas. I have to wonder, though, why are the Birdsongs like that? They all feel pretty DnD-y and not something that fits very well, which is strange considering the phenomenal work put into adapting Roles for this world of birds.

Also, I've found a few possible mistakes that may be remnants of a past version of the game: a reference to Modifiers in 'Playing the Game' when the system seems to be roll-under and multiple references to ft measurements in the Birdsong Descriptions, despite even the combat system not wanting to deal with feet and using zones instead.

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I have uploaded the updated version of the game, fixing the Birdsongs. I simplified the layout as well.

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I know what you mean. I need to go in and redo all the Birdsongs, honestly. I leaned hard into the avian theme of the game, but my Birdsongs are very weak and do not reflect that theme (as you said). I need to look at it harder for this next update; this is actually the first draft, so I've got some work to do! Definitely some other oversights in there, too. Thanks for the feedback. :)