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As many I myself haven't been the happiest with this update. I love the story and everything and enjoyed the parts with the song and animation. I loved the song so much, already when it was first revealed I have myself taught how to sing it, but unfortunately it was ruined by the last scene that was in the update.
I have myself took William as incredibly loyal trouble man, who is having troubles to open up and with Sam's help he will, because they love each other. When Kane came to the picture, he reminded me of classical cocky dom who thinks he can bend over another dominant looking guy. There was flirting from Kane side and Will just brushed it off like nothing happened, because he didn't care for him. It didn't feel to me that Will have taken that much interest in this character outside of being just annoyed of his behaviour.
I was fairly suprised how Will suddently in this update has been quite horny. I didn't feel wrong with Sam, who mentioned Will sucking on his balls and all as a fun tease in middle of a public that new and in secret love couple would do. When he started mentioning Murdoch and other characters, there it felt rusty. Clearly just horniness running his mind off, but it was rather rush considering how strong that man is mentally. From that point it really felt he is looking on every man possible in horny way. That didn't set right with me with the thought of him being so loyal. Sure, he wants to fuck other guys, but in previous updates he never was so horny. I would prefer if he would have gone slower on it than he did in this update...one update building up his sexual openedness isn't enough with Will, because he is very complex character.
I was playing Will as loyal as I could, because I believed he is one, and picked the option of Kane is like Sam...even if I disagreed (He isnt like Kane at all), but there it felt as the only option to progress with choosing only Sam, because there it was the only mention of him. After all that I tried the totally last option, when I got to "to be continued" window.
The end was hot, I tell you that. Atleast the first part where the dominance could be felt. The second part, it was wrong to me to see Will being held against his will (no pun intended and will is not horniness/lustfulness btw) and then silenced by a kiss from Sam, somebody he trusts so much at that point in the game. There it really felt forced and like a betrayel from Sam towards Will. He was listening to commands from different guy and even if he knew that Will likes it rough, he as somebody who loves him, shouldn't progress in this way that could cause another mental break down, but for a different person. He himself have been betrayed because he fell in love with a guy in the beggining through sex and promises. This feels the same, but now the Sam is the bad guy.
Kane ? He is just cocky dom bastard who wanted to hag a dom guy who is switch unknowingly. In my eyes he is just a sex option.
Also another thing that felt out of place.....The only option to continue was the sex scene with Kane, making me feel like this is the direction you want Will to go and the idea of Will being faithful towards Sam is just another direction that can exist, but isnt main nor your focused one. (aka it feels like it is the wrong direction to take)
I am sorry if it is rather long, but George, if you reading this. I am not saying your writing is bad. Till now I was in love with it actually. I aplause you as this is a masterpiece game and I usually hate visual novels. I actually renewed my account here to write this all hah. Of course this is also my opinions and feelings how I took the characters to be. You are the writer and if you wish to bring it that direction, it is on you. I will continue playing, but I will make sure that I will get the best ending for Sam, Will and more.
P.S. Would be interesting to see Will actually feel betrayed by Sam and thus force it in a direction for a negative ending or redemption arc for Sam, but don't know how many chapters would need to be added. I am sure it would take very long time to complete it in the end.
You champ if you got to the end of reading this and sorry for grammar :P