I have just noticed some errors that I need to fix, but didn't.
-For Elucid's original design, the mask was going to be her actual face, and is actually based off of the character Octavia from Helluva Boss.
-The marking, as mentioned in the paragraph about Oscar, is supposed to be a stab wound, implying I died by being stabbed with a knife.
-"murmured" in the paragraph about Corpse Doll's creation should actually read "murdered".
- Corpse Doll was originally called "The Night Mayor" implying his role in the story and being a play on the word "Nightmare." He would have a good guy counterpart, Dr. Eam (a play on the word Dream, as the opposite of a nightmare), but he was scrapped, leaving The Night Mayor, eventually renamed to the Corpse Doll.
- Veribosa's design is more or less a recoloring of Vivi, but with warm colors (ie red and yellow, rather than blue and purple on Vivi) and an evil grin.