A very nice game with cool concept, all the best improving it! Just one thing I will suggest that I didn't like personally is it ended so fast on Day 20, the story was building quite calmly till that time, and suddenly it showed "You didn't make it, better luck next year". I think it would have been better to do add some more story lines saying like "You saw a lot of other magicians", "You were feeling nervous", etc. (not these lines obviously, whatever fits, I just wrote some random things xD) before actually saying "You didn't make it". I mean to take the player to the ending a bit slowly, so it feels more cinematic and realistic like all the other days! Anyway, nice VN! Good Job! =)