I will say it is a great game in it's early stages! So cheers for that!
But there are a few things that bothered me a bit. I listed them below in order.
- In the current version of the game you will get a raise in money when you go up in weight. But think to get a bit more in-depth is after some overworking times, that a promotion is offered instead with the descriptions what the MC is doing in their working hours.
-- adding a bit more to that, is putting a "break" while you're at the office giving the MC the opportunity to hold conversations/deepen the bond between certain characters.
- When the scene of the last weightstage of the MC starts to play, it says that she would need new furniture to accomodate her. That could also be more fleshened out. Giving you the choice to add more things to her house (like sofa's, better cooking equipment, etc.)
- This more of a personal idea. So you can leave it alone if you don't like it. The mukbang stream is a good idea where the MC herself can do it aswell, but only on days off. Like a weekend. But that would mean implementing a "week"-system. Where the MC works from monday till friday (typically standard I know) and saturday/sunday do other things. But that would be overthrowing the whole system and a lot of work.
I am still playing the game to see if there are other things that come to my notice. But I will say it again, IT IS A GOOD GAME WITH A GOOD START! And I cheer for you to make your vision for the game a reality (and finish it, that you can be proud of aswell)