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Loving the game, I was really looking for something simple to get friends into skirmish games and this might be perfect.

Some feedback, if  it's helpful:

Typos

Page 16: in the description of the cover image, point 3 ends with "She can only see Skeletons A and B." I think, if I understand correctly, that is meant to be A and C.

Formatting

Page 11: Victory Conditions - The last letter of "scenario" is not bolded. 

Page 20: SOUL actions - The SOUL Harvest heading has a lower-case l in SOUL

Page 21: Pick Units - The last sentence has an extra space and full-stop at the end.

I also have two questions on parts that I was uncertain of:

Page 14: Armor Type - "A unit can only benefit from armor once" Is that once per game or once each time it takes damage?

Page 20: SOUL actions - SOUL Harvest says "You only get this benefit the first time a unit is slain in combat". Likewise, is that once per game or once per unit?

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re: SOUL Harvest: I think it's supposed to be once per unit, because the description for thralls says that "Since you get two units per slot with thralls, they are good for body blocking and for generating SOUL", which implies that you get two SOUL per unit slot spent on thralls.