What a name.
Presentation: Cool. Extremely minimal, lets you focus on the text, which is pleasant and poetic. No point overstays its welcome. I like that the figures aren't animated but everything else is, it creates a hypnotic effect.
Narrative: Fun! Has some real pathos esp given how short it is. I like focusing in on a single humour like this. The dour theology musing reminds me of some folk punk I listen to occasionally. Well done Democritus Jr II!