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Hey, I may play through your game again, and give my critiques on the writing and world building, and if I'm right, I will probably have to critique some of the more political sided takes as well, I made it clear I don't actually like politics, but you said it to me yourself, you're a silly leftist and it's going to happen, that's absolutely fine and I actually do respect it, but it is still worth critique, no idea presented isn't worth that. Last time I played was the trip to Japantown, so I'm curious as to how you've progressed the story or if you've even changed bits of the earlier levels. Just a heads up, I don't want to write another super long critique and annoy you in anyway, and again, I will also write down my positives too, if a critique is only negative, how would someone know what they did well, right?

Have a good day, see ya in maybe a few months.

(Also, if ya don't want my critiques this comment saves us both some time)