I wasn't expecting you to top Dawn with such a short VN, especially featuring a character I had almost no connection with, but somehow you did it. Hanging out with virtual Roxie and talking about stuff almost was more fun than eventually getting to the "good part". Came for the action (again), stayed for the character.
Seriously, I haven't met any person who was able to get me that invested with what is basically fan fiction. Really really looking forward to what you have in store with Shauntal!