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Amazing work so far. love the amount of interaction especially with the phone even though some things buttons don’t do anything (yet?). I love the story so far and the H-scenes are pretty good as well so keep it up. now on to the critique, don’t worry nothing too major.

1, The English Grammar is somewhat bad at some if not most times throughout the story.

2, Flashing visual glitches mainly when using the phone or any hardcoded events using the phone.

3, No way of seeing character stats i.e. (Affection, Submission and other stats) unless you get to the end of Chapter 1.

4.I believe TheRealArma has told you the remaining problems so I wont list them as I’m sure you are already aware.

Other then these four problems the game is very good and you can expect my support and feedback moving forward. Have a great rest of your day/evening/night and I hope my little humble review helps you fix some minor issues.

Hello, and thank you! I'm thrilled to hear that you're enjoying the story and scenes. Now, let's address your points:

1. I'm aware of this issue, and I've already made significant textual corrections in version 0.1.1 (although I'm not sure which version you played). Rest assured, I'll continue to work on improving this aspect.

2. This is new feedback. Could you please provide some images, videos, or more details to help me pinpoint the issue? You can share them on Discord (the link can be found above). The framework used in the game isn't created by me, as you can see in the game credits, but I'll certainly investigate it!

3. Vertical bars in the characters' stats app are already on my Trello board for the next chapter. I appreciate your input on this!

4. Yes, they are on my to-do list as well! Although I haven't had much time to think them through yet.

Once again, thank you very much for your feedback. Your reports will only serve to enhance the overall gaming experience for everyone!

- DP

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I will give you a video of #2 right away on discord. thank you for the quick reply and as always stay safe.

Awesome, thank you and stay safe too!