Find it hard to believe that this is your first game with how good things are. For starters the story is interesting and kind of makes me regret checking this out when there's only one chapter available, I didn't want it to end just yet!
The renders and lighting are also great! Usually the first few chapters of some games have a little too much bloom or characters look as though they're made of plastic or something. I didn't notice anything like that though.
Ontop of all that, the characters all actually feel different, too often do games come out where everyone looks different but all seem to have the same personality and mannerisms.
As though all that isn't enough, the options menu gives more options than the vast majority of VN's I follow! Off the top of my head, I think the only comparable one is Stormside. I do kinda wish there was also a little audio cue for the Glitches when you have the hint option enabled, they can be easy to miss at times. Though, I did find 75% of them so I suppose I can't complain too much.
Some minor things I noticed during my play through:
I think that something was accidentally overlooked during the intro.
Lucy mentions that she was surprised she was one of MC's emergency contacts when he set them up when buying his new phone. Then shortly later Lucy notes how when he was found after the accident his phone was broken.
If his phone was broken the hospital staff wouldn't be able to access his emergency contacts, right? Unless he listed them as one to the doctor to have on file themselves after an appointment or something.
When Lucy, Anya and MC are sitting down to eat pizza and MC talks about repaying them Lucy is the one speaking but the render is of Anya with her mouth open to speak.