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I like it so far, I look forward to what's next. 💕 I can't wait to find out what the freak took place and what MCs future holds.

If I do have any feedback: My only thing would be ( something that I don't mind trying to get used to, as you update. )- But the text being typed in a bullet point kind of style. It was making it hard to get really into it- immersion wise. It sometimes felt like I was just stating actions and events; versus reading a plot. Almost how poems are written in lines. 

Mind you, this isn't really a huge issue. It doesn't make your game unbearable to read at all. I think it's more of a personal qualm than anything, my mind is just used to seeing paragraph format.

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Hi! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!

Yes, this part of the prologue is very to the point. I didn't really stop to think about it, but I went to see the second part that I wrote, and it is more in paragraph format than the released part. I think it's because I had more things to write about, like character descriptions, enviorement and etc.  But I'll take a better look at it and try to improve it for the next update!

Thank you very much for your opinion! ♥️