I'm a little kid who is starting a new year in a new city, having trouble make friends and ends up friending birds. The ending I got was the bird didn't bring a gift but pecked and goes onto the hair. There was no issue only a few punctuation mistakes but all is good. The color of the background and text gives this sky feeling. And birds are know to fly in the sky. So it works out very well, feel just a few more images and sounds of birds chipping would make it better. It's very cute that the bird would being gifts to the kid.