Aesthetically an absolute triumph. If yoi're going to continue to develop this I have three recommendations.
1) Rotating the camera is too slow. Speed it up.
2) It would be better to just let the player move to the next area without having to wait for the pet (pets?). I understand your thinking, but it adds nothing to the gameplay and is mostly just annoying.
3) Have someone good at english proofread it. It's perfecttly comprehensible, but it's also apparent that whoever wrote it isn't very good at english.
Best of luck!