I like Travis' enthusiasm towards Halloween it made me laugh and also he's kinda right? (I like bunnies though so that I don't agree with him on)
I really like the type of art style used around when Travis says "It's hard to pinpoint when exactly I fell in love with halloween" and also Craig's style. If you're able to potentially cut out traditionally drawn characters and put them on a transparent background for sprites I think it could look really cool with your style.
One minor typo that should be a quick fix, the intro says "Novelel" instead of "Novel".
I sincerely hope you keep working at this!