I'll start with negative things:
1. I feel like you should have use more of the given time for Game Jam, because I'd love to play it again with more plot. I wish it was explained more... Also there are missing details, like, Aaron's face is not moving, only brows, and I was confused about probably five black screens in a row.
2. Although I appreciate three endings, I'm not a fan of small choices that add or delete one line of dialogue, you know :p I don't wanna put spoilers here, so there was a moment, when you're asked whether Aaron should *do something* or not - either way he does that, he just disagrees. But that's just my personal thoughts, that ain't a huge con.
About positive things:
1. I LOVE the vibe!! Art especially, custom font and chosen music.
2. My favorite ending is a bad ending though haha, character there - you know which - is well done! I mean their style, details, way of being etc.
3. Whole game is lovely, sets the mood while playing for the first time and I definitely would play it if there were another chapter or anything! <3