Wow, i really love the concept of this game. It immediately struck me as emotional and melancholy, and that feeling continued throughout the "true" twist ending. even though I began to anticipate it, I felt myself empathizing with and thinking like the main character still.
i do agree that some of the endings where you can die feel distracting and random when compared to the premise. maybe if you could make them more in line with the game's slow, melancholic feel? but regardless, this game is very impactful and i enjoyed playing it!