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I want to say how much I love this game ^^ Short, but soooooo full of excellent ideas ! The transformation's possibilities, the characters, the story... I will detail my thinking ^^
- About the characters : They are all unic and, for what I've seen, well writed. The thing that both kings who was pissed off by Magnificience's polyamory have both bastards hidden from the official royal family is very ironic, I loved it x3 Magnificience seems to be a nice person, but that it will be hard to get to a point where she'll love us enough to let it seen. tessa the cunning corgi... Well, too bad that even with the alliance and trust we do to her she trick us all the same. I mean, that's normal she do because she don't want at all to loose, but I was surprised she didn't even consider us more that opponent x3 So I'm so curious to know her more to see her real self ^^ Akari (because I turn her into a woman I will call her like that for ever x3)... I hope we'll can be friends one day. I fact, I hope that we can befriend everyone ^^ Not instantly of course, but progressively, and not necessarly because we speak what everyone wanted to hear 100% of the time. I will not list every characters, but I enjoy them all ; my favorite being Magnificience ^^
- About the transformations : They are already excellent, but could be better in my sens. I may say things you already want to do but that's not shown here because it was not long enough to show it, but I speak it anyways ^^ Firstly, there is no path choices for transformation, just choosing to do it or no. For exemple Magnificience we can only shorten her. I... Felt bad doing so, so I didn't done anything. I think that it could be very cool if we have more choices and can unlock some by discussing. Like, I can shoose to make her shorter, but too taller ! How we'll made her taller ? Maybe because when we discuss she have some pride about looming over us and so we want to please her ^^ And we can put in her the crave to bet even bigger, so after that we can grow her boobs, make her fatter et caetera... I've also seen than transformation don't impact the relationship. Even when someone is pissed off about something she speak to us like we didn't do anything to them. And the "hateful" reactions to the transformations I think it could be very nice is we have a choice where we pay the right price but the reaction is like it must be or pay a little more for that the one changed enjoy his changes, that would be great ! For exemple insteed of paying 3 for making Akari fatter, paying 4 and she'll enjoy to be fat :3 So we can turn anyone like we want without breaking our relations. And I hope that one transformation isn't the last, that we'll be hable to do it again later. For exemple, if we can grow Magnificience's boobs at the start (presumingly we could) we can grow them even more later. I think that we can overdone it if we do itt too much time, making someone turn just barely mobile if some body part get too big ^^ For resuming : more choices and more chances to avoid to piss off the one we do it <3
- About the relationship : I feel like we're locked. The alliance with the corgi, the speakig with Marazet, anything we do to Magnidicience... I don't feel like it's impacting anything on a relationship level. Magnificience hate us because we're a male and "betray" our brother, Marazet is always happy with us (and that made the thing that she decide to team up with us only if we speak two times to her before a bit weird) and no matter what alliance we do with the corgi it just desapear into nothingness, like we didn't done anything. About Rhianna the love thing is a good idea ! A mental transformation that impact both of us, nice ! But it's too quick. I think that would be somuch better if that go in 3 steps : the first time we make her a friend, the second a lover and the 3rd a passionate and obsessed lover. That would be good I think ^^ And not necessarly a forced progression : for exemple frienship cost 3, love 5 and deep love 7, and if we choose friendship love will cost 2 and deep love 5 the next time we'll have to choose :3 And that put me to the next step : choice.
- About the choices : This is a game with a lot of potential, and what is in is already veeeeery good ! But I think making it even more personalisable would be great ! I already give exemples for choices, but I think it lack a lot on discussion. I think it would be cool to have options time to time in discussions. On will improove our relationship, other will launch a transformation request or anything. We can too have discussion choices who will degradate our relationship. The choices in important places are very good ! Llike when Akari want to take the rule, during the fight, choosing during the chess... Except with the corgi : in my sens it would be better if we had the choice to lost again her by playing smoothly for indulge her or seriously and beat her at this, like we have choice for the other two. I enjoyed a lot the fact that we unlock choices depending of what we do before, and the choices have a great impact ! I think if you add more choices in transformations and discussions that would be more than amazing !
- About the story and the draws : I love all. The draws are beautiful (even if the legs are missing at some places and that disturb me when I see it and that Akari's gender bending are in sketch), the characters have good expressions, proportions, I love them. They are, in a way, in harmony with the music ^^ And the story... I dont know much, but I'm so curious of it ! Why, how and what ! It's a great base for what happen now, and even if at the start there would be a religion who'll explain who is the host it didn't and that add mystery. I'm full in it and crave for more ! Such an excellent and promising visual novel, I'm just too sad that's just the beggining because I crave so much to know more and play more of it ^^ I've almost do everything we can by reloading and restarting, I'm truly passionated by it ! I can't help on patreon now because I can't afford it, but if I could I would do ! I would love to take an YCH for see my lioness in your story, and help you... But I can't. Maybe later ^^
- About bugs : I found two, both linked to Magnificient. The first one is when we had changed Akarion into Akari and go at the dinner place when we have 1 point of action left : if we eardrop we go to 0, but can do an other action. There, we go in -1 and the chess challenge start. The second is that we pay and use the transformation into shortstack on Magnificient more than one time and that don't change anything. On others that's locked.
- About what I think of this game : I LOVE it !!!!! So much ! I can't wait to see more, and I hope that the excellent feeling I've about it will be better and better <3 This game is very promising, felicitations :3 I'm truly afraid that will be an abandonned project one day, I hope not ! And... I must say that the most important feature I hope that'll come is to befriend Magnificience as a male and make her taller and fatter héhéhé ^^ Oh, and tun her into an herm ! Being all female, vagina included but with balls and cock too would be amazing ; a great way to make her enjoy more maleness~ Like, she feel it and love it ^^ Would it be impregnation and oviposition too ? :3
- Conclusion : Excellent work ! Really, continu your good work :3