I've been waiting hungrily for this next update and I can confidently say I'm not disappointed! It was AMAZING!
I can't wait to see a full game release, the world you're building is fascinating! The writing is top notch as always and the spice was VERY spicy (That last scene with Alex, dear LORD). Unraveling the truth behind the origins of Eternum is a mystery I can't wait to solve.
I was drawn in from start to finish, absolutely captivating! So much so that part of me never wants it to end, I could disappear into that world for days. Your writing feels so natural. The dialogue flows realistically, and doesn't make the MC seem fake. You've written your characters in a way that really makes me care for them. Seeing them succeed and conquer the challenges put in front of them, seeing them happy, makes me happy.
Great work Caribdis, you've impressed me again! Can't wait for the next update!
P.S. Luna best girl, need more of her 🌙🇲🇽