Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback. And yea I was questioning myself also if it really would be considered a true "magical girl" story, buuuut I went with it anyway lol. And I had a lot more planned for the deer and the rabbit, but I had other things I had to work on so I had to cut a lot out :(. But again, thank you very much for checking it out and for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Oh, and yea I plan to expand it and add a few more endings, as well as make a better, more unique battle system too. ^_^