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Lovely game so far. My only gripe with it is that the characterization seems a bit unclear. Not sure if the MC is selfish or not, and from Momo I’m really unsure if she’s super manipulative or earnest.

Small bug report. In the “She’s not a…” quest after you hand in the 8 logs and talk to Elizabeth, the previous quest step will uncheck itself and you will need to have another 8 logs in your inventory to finish it.

Also, I’m not sure if this is temporary, but having a percentage of your current money taken away every week doesn’t make much sense. That just incentivizes me to only sell things when I need the money. A system like in Scarlet Law, where you often need to make large purchases and have to pay a fixed amount every week that increases the more nuns you have, seems more fitting. Although in Scarlet Law not having that money would result in a game over. Maybe there’s a better alternative.

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Thank you so much for playing my game and for giving some feedback.

Although I don't consider myself as a good writer or anything like that at all I like characters having more than one "characteristic"  I think people behaves differently with certain people/situations and they change their behavior over time so I always try to do it that way when writing my characters. Nevertheless I should pay more attention to those details.

That bug has been already fix :)

That's exactly what will happen in later updates. That feature is in a very early development state right now.