Hey, just read your VN and I liked the story!
I like how it discusses some of the misconceptions and tropes about vampires, as well as how it puts the characters into those sorts of situations. I will say that the story, while enjoyable and cute, is a little cliché for my taste (maybe it's because I'm not a huge romance fan). Most of the characters seem to have some degree of depth to them, but some are a little bland, mostly Xavier.
I was expecting a plot twist the whole time, but I didn't really find it anywhere? Please let me know where it was, I don't think it stood out as much to me.
The music and sounds are good, the graphics look like they were hand-drawn in a basic digital style, which I'm fine with. The voice acting was decent, though I did find that some of the lines that were delivered didn't match the situation well, or the emotion the character was feeling.
I could use some feedback on my game as well, if you don't mind: https://wasabiiii.itch.io/grass-elemental-demo-demo
Overall, you guys did a great job! I'd be happy to join your subreddit, by the way!