There are some minor flaws in the text like being refered to as a son of the family even if you are a girl, wrong pronouns being used for both the MC as well as some of the characters, sometimes even within the same sentence or just some generic spelling mistakes, but despite this the story and with it the game looks to be promising.
I am curious whether or not some features like character profiles, and text rollback to circumvent save spamming would be introduced later down the line, as they are a staple of text based IFs. At any rate can't wait to see where this goes, keep up the great work!