I almost doubted Jen at the start of her appearance in the story, n would only serve as a embellishment
Ur creativity deserves thumbs up in building a story, each character can get their own portion of the story. At least they are not just decoration at the beginning of their appearance xD
Its a genius way on several occasions we as 'players' can get information through stories told by certain characters. It was like when the MC with Kat to help her pick ice plants, she said that a mage have a life span that was much longer than most normal humans, or when the MC was with Bredita who said that the last wild dragon alive was in Ayna's n the rest lived in Ryo and Koneko's hometown(I hope MC can visit General Chang's wife again without being incognito, lmao)
Btw personally i like the character design of Queen Lufina, a milf with a youthful appearance(hundreds of years old maybe, with a lot of experience of course xD), Alma comes in second with a fun personality to hang out with(that's before Lust u know, Lust gaddamit u gonna pay for this b#tch!!!), the last one n only my lovely Mida with all her naughty ideas. Overall, all the characters have their own unique n personalities, and u managed to present them well. Just hope u don't change their personalities too much in the future for the sake of the story:)
Well done sir( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)👍 n keep going