Sadly, I didn't much care for the MC's personality, and not a huge fan of the others. It feels very generic, the stereotypical, swearing weirdo badass, all across the board. I wish that someone would write a really cool sophisticated male who can be scary without dropping f-bombs left right and center. I'd also appreciate a MC that I feel like my personality is actually compatible with. This is just my humble opinion, I wish you luck regardless on your game and from the comments below I can see a great many people have fallen hook line and sinker for your story. I hope you are able to finish it.
Sincerely,
Adira