Good idea about remaking, I know kinda sounds bad but the game is nearing its end I love the flow of the story but it has some holes in it that needs filling though, some scenes are kind of cringe (positive ones).
about the girls falling in love with the MC very quickly, it sits between good and bad, the good part is we get the girls no issue but the bad part is, less backstories and less screentime with the other girls.
the has its UPS and DOWNS but, GREAT game nonetheless and I'll say this, it's one of the most polished games I ever read. I approve of the game to be remaked but... this means more work for you.
P.S: I hope you have enough time to rest the remake might take months but it's ok as long as you take a break from time to time.
motto: Quality precision.