I like the premise of the game and clearly, a lot of love and effort has gone into its creation. Clearly, you respect the player's time and understand how people play games like this, evidenced by the inclusion of fast travel and the ability to rewatch sex scenes at any time.
Unfortunately, there is a recurring issue with grammatical errors throughout virtually every instance of dialogue in the game. It might be worthwhile to find a native English speaker to act as a proofreader going forward.