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So far a nice little fun game.

The stealth in the first levels could here and there use some adjustments since there are a few spots where it is really tight to get through without being spotted. Maybe giving bigger time windows or the abilitiy/possibilty to distract guards so you can sneak by them easier.

My biggest nitpick would probably be that the writing in itself could also need some work. Besides the obvious checking for spelling errors, I think it would be a better read if the words chosen to discribe her genitals for example wouldn't always just use words like "perverted", "naughty" and so on. Kinda feels like one would say "cold snow" or "hot fire", in short: those adjectives feel pretty unnecessary (I also think those bodyparts aren't perverted just because of the nature what they are, so for me these words are also unfitting). Pink, puffy, stiff or wet for example would be much better choices if you ask me or just leave them be by themselves. I also got the feeling that some sentences are kinda repetitive, so that two following sentences discribe the same thing, which feels kinda forced to put the focus on something. I don't think there is a need to force the texts to appear longer.

That being said; so far I enjoyed the game and am curious what else there is waiting and will be in the future!