(meant as constructive feedback, sorry when it does sound too harsh)
next to the images the text is the import part of the game - and I think the size is too small and using the normal view (default text box, quick menu enabled) the interface is rather cluttered, distracting from the written story.
I would welcome a text size slider, the built-in options (switching to a different text box style, disabling the quick menu) are at least for my eyes not enough :)
but anyway, as I'm still interested in the plot I poked around in your scripts and increased the default font size from 30 to 40. let's see how the plot develops!