Hi!
I've just finished the demo. I really love this idea and I think it'll be a great and unique game :)
However, there are some parts that annoyed me during the gameplay. Writing out the text this way just seems too... basic for me. Maybe it's the non-pixelic font style when the game itself is in a pixel art style. I'd change the font type and also position it somewhere else - or put a background behind the text, like in RenPy-based visual novels. Also, I'd say the voice is a bit too deep for the main character, it didn't fit the main character (for me at least).
Other than these, it's gonna be an amazing game :) Thank you for giving us the opportunity to test it <3