I liked the game very much, and was surprised/very sad with the sudden end of the story - and also because I'm a taurus and that wasnt an option >:(. On improvements in general: I think the expressions are a little confusing; when Alan smiled with his teeth I felt like it was very creepy - maybe because the pupils were too small and a little too centered? close eyes smile was fine -, but the Y.N behaved like it was normal; if it was suposed to be "a weird smile, but because Alan is simply bad with expressions", I think it should have a comment expliciting that. Other expressions were a little off as well, like the wicked one. About suddenly leaving Stu: I'm not sure a regular person would be mad about that. Erika was a bad "target", because of her bad experiences, but it seems normal to me to reach someone just to get their phone number. I think "Stu antics" should be something else, more weird or annoying - but the plot is great if YN is just jealous of Stu. Also, I hope we get the option to like girls too. Anyways, its a great game and I'm excited to see any developments; I dont usually play visual novels, but this one caught my eye and kept my interest :)