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(3 edits)

started playing the public 0.6.4 - nice so far, looking forward to see the plot unfold.

a few remarks about your gallery:

* currently the "show" button only displays the preview image, but the replay of yet unseen scenes is still locked

* the replay uses the default name of the MC

* you prepared a, still unused, variable (persistent.gallery_name) but a separate one is imo not needed: you have two perfectly fine variables: persistent.pov and persistent.povlastname

I propose to do something like:

default persistent.pov = "Leo"
default persistent.povlastname = "Somerfort"

-> somewhere in one of your generic files, to prevent crashes when the name was not yet set (the current setter is in 01ACT.rpy around line 180, before the 2 persistent variables are invalid)


replace in replay.rpy around line 20 the current "action Replay(Replay_items[i].replay)" with

action Replay(Replay_items[i].replay, locked=False, scope = {"povname": persistent.pov, "povlastname": persistent.povlastname} )

-> locked=False mitigates the issue that unseen scenes are still locked, even when persistent.replayUnlocked is true (i.e. "show" button used)

-> the scope gives the replay a list of variable mappings, here first and lastname of the MC from the persistent store


to update the name depending on the used save extend label after_load (in screens.rpy around line 20) with

$ persistent.pov = povname
$ persistent.povlastname = povlastname

a few bonus typos:

./z_scripts/02ACT.rpy:2358: adviced->advised

./z_dlc/dlc1assist.rpy:2995: everyting->everything

./z_dlc/dlc1assist.rpy:2209, ./z_scripts/02ACTC1HSCENES.rpy:36: flourescent->fluorescent

./z_scripts/01ACT.rpy:14114: idealogies->ideologies

./z_scripts/02ACTC1HSCENES.rpy:283: irresistable->irresistible

./z_dlc/dlc1assist.rpy:2191: mischevious->mischievous

./z_scripts/01ACT.rpy:7656: transfered->transferred

./z_scripts/01ACT.rpy:18129, ./z_scripts/01ACT.rpy:18186: lets->let's (quite sure both are in the meaning of "let us")

./z_scripts/02ACT.rpy:1686: wont->won't